"he said, 'it is finished,' and he gave up the ghost"

[jazzfish]

Well, that's a draft. And unlike previous 'that's a draft's I think I am sufficiently happy with this one.

By which I mean, I don't think I can make it much better, and certainly not enough better to justify the increasingly diminishing returns of pounding away on it.

So I'll send this draft off for a couple of final reads to make sure I haven't completely screwed anything up, and then I guess it's time for another page in the submission spreadsheet.

And also to figure out what I'm going to be working on at Rainforest next week.

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[jazzfish]

(ack, thought i had posted this a week ago)
Hm. I am generally only on Skype when I've set up a specific "hey we should talk" time with someone. Having said that I would be up for setting up such a thing. Will email.