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Jul. 15th, 2010 12:52 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
jazzfishWords: 1003
Total words: 5217
Neat things: "You have been most creative. And entertaining."
And that's a draft. Not a good draft, not a draft that I think does much at all that I want it to, but a draft. It has inconsistent characters, a plot with at least one moderately-sized hole, not enough description (especially not of the GSS Audacity), an insufficient amount of exposition for it to make sense to people who don't live in my head, a great deal of talkiness and not much action, and an ending that probably doesn't come across properly at all.
But it is a draft. And tomorrow (well, later today, at this point) I'll poke gently at it and try to clean it up, and then submit it to CVS for a critique next week.
Total words: 5217
Neat things: "You have been most creative. And entertaining."
And that's a draft. Not a good draft, not a draft that I think does much at all that I want it to, but a draft. It has inconsistent characters, a plot with at least one moderately-sized hole, not enough description (especially not of the GSS Audacity), an insufficient amount of exposition for it to make sense to people who don't live in my head, a great deal of talkiness and not much action, and an ending that probably doesn't come across properly at all.
But it is a draft. And tomorrow (well, later today, at this point) I'll poke gently at it and try to clean it up, and then submit it to CVS for a critique next week.
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